Auto Fiona

[June]

Full Name:
Auto-Automaton Freedom Fighter Series Renard
A.K.A. Fiona Fox

Age:
One year

Gender:
Female-coded

Species:
Red fox-modeled Auto-Automaton

Residence:
Robotropolis

Personality:
Auto Fiona is a shadow of her original. She mimics her mannerisms, biases, and beliefs but she has none of her own. She is playing a part character of Fiona, even if she does not know it. Her loyalty to Robotnik is absolute. She goes about things in a manner that alternates between playful and intense. Overall she is just a bit unstable and riddled with bugs.

Likes:
Guns, breaking hearts, explosions, girls, guns, did we mention guns

Dislikes:
Dancing, chocolate ice cream, heights

Talent and abilities:

• An electro-magnetic field obscures her from metal detectors.
  
• She has been programmed with extensive combat, survival, and tactical data. She knows several forms of martial arts and a few weapons of the melee and firearm variety.
  
• Eidetic memory and super fast processing power. She can react faster than any badnik before her.
  

Weaknesses:

• Cannot swim
  
• Not actually cognizant. Completely under Robotnik's control.
  
• Magnets can scramble certain functions, she cannot swim at all, she does not heal so she must be repaired.
  
• Needy. Like, really needy, you don't even know.
  

Appearance:
My shitty doodle. I will draw something better for this profile later.


History:
Fiona grew up on the streets of Mobotropolis. Her family was whole, though her situation instilled within her a sort of angry pragmatism. She was needy by nature but her situation forced her to put on a brave face. The early years of her life were spent hopping from shelter to shelter or even living in abandoned buildings with other homeless families. But then everything changed when Robotnik attacked. Fiona was torn from her parents and placed to work as a slave in Robotnik's coal mines. When the Freedom Fighters broke into the facility to rescue the slaves Fiona was left behind.

The mines crippled without a workforce, Robotnik relocated those left behind to the labs. There Fiona was subject to traumatic experiments - cloning, cybernetic augmentation, brain mapping. She did not succesfully escape for years and not before Robotnik got what he wanted. He created a robotic duplicate, a perfect replica of Fiona Fox, and then an entire team of "Renegade Freedom Fighters".

Anything Else?


Player:
June

[Gatorman]

APPROVED!

[shm128iii]

I'd like to see you expand on her strengths and weaknesses a bit. Get in a bit more detail about what kind of combat training she's had, for instance. Was she trained in hand-to-hand? Melee weapons? Firearms? All of the above? Also, you claim she has "other robot weaknesses" without ever explaining what said weaknesses are. Are talking about her not being waterproof, or the fact that she could be restrained by strong enough magnets or hacked? You can't just assume we know what those weaknesses are.

Also, while this is more a formality than anything else, it's usually best to mention what a robot is modeled after in the species field as well. Yes, it's pretty obvious in Fiona's case (her last name is Fox, for cryin' out loud), but it's still good practice. Have it instead say something like "[species of fox]-modeled Auto-Automation" in that field.

... And now that I'm looking at it, isn't auto-automation a bit... redundant? Unless that's actually what she was called in the comics, in which case... Robotnik, we need to talk about how you name things. Seriously.

[June]

Done and done.

Yes, she was actually called the Auto-Automaton in the comics.

[shm128iii]

... Okay. Robotnik, get in here. You name things bad and you should feel bad.



*ahem* In all seriousness, though, nice work making the adjustments I asked for. Approved!