Julie-Su the Echidna (APP EXPIRED)

[dorky]

Full Name:
Julie-Su the Echidna

Age:
17

Gender:
Female

Species:
Echidna

Residence:
Currently in Knothole.

Personality:
Julie-Su is a tough, tomboyish echidna. Her actions tend to be more masculine and she doesn't know how to sympathetic to most female-centric plights.

Likes:
Julie-Su enjoy sparing with Knuckles more than anything, or just spending time with Knuckles in general. She cares for her friends and Knuckles' family dearly. Julie-Su also has a soft spot for spicy foods.

Dislikes:
She doesn't like the Dark Legion, nor anyone who chooses to affiliate with it. Julie-Su hates anything that could potentially hurt or even kill Knuckles. She also despises dressing up, which Knuckles' mother enjoys torturing her with. She hates Vector's attitude towards and because of this the two often fight.

Talent and abilities:
Weapons include a double-barrel multipurpose proton gun and a taser. She has cybernetic implants including her left arm and some of her dreadlocks. The cybernetics in her arm give her greater strength than her other limbs. Her cybernetics can also be used for communications and sometimes hacking, even though she's not very good at it. Julie-Su has also trained in various different styles of martial arts.

Weaknesses:
One of her main weaknesses is that she's not a people person. It takes her awhile to get close to someone. She also has troubles fighting friends if they're turned evil, especially Knuckles. Other than that she tries not to let her weaknesses show.

Appearance:
Julie-Su is a pink echidna with purple tinted bangs and a tawny muzzle . She has visible cybernetics on various parts of her body including dreadlocks, arms, and her leg. She's fairly petite compared to most other girls her age. She dress only in what she considers comfortable; a black/teal tank top, teal boots, a gold belt, and gloves. She carries her gun on a holster attached to her boot.

History:
Julie-Su is the daughter of Luger and his second wife, Mari-Su. After the death of her parents her memories were erased and was then raised by an older couple due her older sibling's dislike of her.

Julie-Su grew an almost instant attachment after meeting the guardian, Knuckles. Since then she's stayed by his side. Through Knuckles she met and grew attached to both the Chaotix and Freedom Fighters.


Player:
My name's dorky, what else do I need to say? I'm a kind and artistic kind of dork.

[Gatorman]

Hoo boy, this application is going to need a lot of work. Let's go through this one field at a time:

I'm curious; why would Julie live in Knothole at the moment? Mind you, we're planning to open up Angel Island for use once we get a few more characters in there.

Her personality is sorely lacking; five sentences are needed there. See if you can add even more.

Your list of talents/abilities is very good, although her weapons would belong in the "Anything Else?" field. In its place, you may describe in Talents/Abilities her experience with handling those weapons.

See if you can add another weakness to that list. If you're stuck for ideas, fall back on that species' physical weaknesses! She may also have a phobia or two as well; don't be constrained by what you know from the comic. Feel free to add as much as you can.

My main concern is in Likes, Dislikes and History: you're mentioning all these things with Knuckles and Vector and the Chaotix as if they already took place. As we are starting from the events of issue 17 none of those things have happened yet. I'd also like to hear about what she did growing up. If she was a Dark Legionnaire at one time, it would be best to describe her time there.